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About Me Member Pseudo-Intellectual LaurenFemale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 10 Months
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Scene 3[Fade in on a quiet neighborhood street. A few children are running around, darting behind and through the street's scarce foliage in an exhausting game of hide-and-seek. A little yellow house sits on the left side of the street. It appears to be a perfectly quaint little dwelling, with a welcome mat on the front porch and a brass plaque on the door that reads, "The Millars." However, upon closer inspection, this house is in need of desperate repair. The faded yellow paint is chipped and cracked around the edges of the foundation, peeling away to reveal a foreboding green stain on the concrete. Though the mold is slow-growing, it still poses Scene 3
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So Be Itthe choir sings  heaven's praises  amen   
like a river  music flowing  resonating   
the room shakes  notes merge  vivacity   
all is quiet  but alive  still   
the music remains  as always  amen So Be It
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Reflection
by ~Undercaffinated
The Consequences of AnarchyThe poet read aloud from a book
who's name I can't quite place
All I remember about that old green book
are the markings on my face   The verses the poet read aloud were foreign to me
however, I knew they were important
The electricity flickers, the book is slammed shut
The ending time quite pertinent
 For at that moment we had guests
who had come for one purpose only
To usurp the readings of the poet
who's book had "saved the lonely"
 I grabbed the nearest chair I saw
I started to swing it 'round
I felt my legs fall out from under me
I heard the crack of ground
 I sit here now in my lonely house
thinking of the old g The Consequences of Anarchy
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HEY LOOK A KITTEN

Mon Sep 14, 2009, 1:33 PM
Okay, so there are no kittens. Sorry.
There is, however, a pissed off Lauren.


PRETEENS. Stop spamming up the front page with your crappy webcam pics. JUST because you have a webcam/digital camera does not make you a photographer. I know you're just "expresing your creativity~!!!2!!123uz," but the problem with that lies in the fact that YOU'RE NOT BEING CREATIVE. If you haven't noticed, there are about 500,000 other preteens that are doing the exact same thing. For god's sakes, take a photography class and see if your instructor puts up with ten billion snapshots of you in thick eyeliner and black clothes.

The same goes for "omgmylifesuccckkkkkssss" poetry/prose. Now, I get sad too, we all do! I've suffered through depression, and a lot of other crap. However, I didn't open up MS Word everytime I felt a hormone rush and crap out some junk about how "you're a black rose with thorns and darkness and black and death blah blah blah."

So yeah. Stop.

~Lauren

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  • Interests: Writing, Literary Critique, Socks
  • Favourite movie: Rent
  • Favourite band or musician: Dave Matthews Band
  • Favourite genre of music: Showtunes (is this a genre? xD)
  • Favourite artist: damn-yuki
  • Favourite poet or writer: George Orwell
  • Favourite style of art: I can't pick just one! xD
  • Operating System: Ubuntu Linux/Windows Vista
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod Touch
  • Shell of choice: The shell on a chocolate truffle, thankyaverymuch.
  • Wallpaper of choice: anything from failblog.
  • Skin of choice: ...my own? o.o
  • Favourite game: Monopoly
  • Favourite cartoon character: YOUR MOTHER.
  • Tools of the Trade: Keyboard, MS Word,

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~XxBlack-Emo-BloodxX 3 days 2 hours ago
so i would love it if you would leave me alone -_- and stay in your own little happy world awayfrom me...

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In the shadows of your nightmares is where my soul sleeps , threw your thoughts and your dreams it creeps
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~XxBlack-Emo-BloodxX 3 days 2 hours ago
oh btw if you dont like my writing dont read it, i write what ever i am feelling at the moment to let out my pain... i need a vent because of my problems if i dont vent threw drawing or writing i will kill some one.... my friends found out the hard way... i almost killed one of them...

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In the shadows of your nightmares is where my soul sleeps , threw your thoughts and your dreams it creeps
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~Undercaffinated 3 days 2 hours ago
...yeah. Seriously, get some help. I'm not telling you to stop writing or drawing, I'm telling you to go see a fucking psychiatrist and get on some fucking antidepressants before you actually do kill someone and get locked up for the rest of your life. :/
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~XxBlack-Emo-BloodxX 3 days 1 hour ago
i wont kill any one as long as i draw.. and..my mom was already on that crap and it made her worse!

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In the shadows of your nightmares is where my soul sleeps , threw your thoughts and your dreams it creeps
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*vampy6667 Sep 7, 2009, 10:14:59 PM
Thanks for the visit :) hope you liked my gallery lol :D

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"Twisted is such a strong term...just say i'm Demonically sadistic...heh" Nebiros Isou (AKA sadistic bastard)
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*Soleste81 Sep 5, 2009, 4:42:50 PM
thanks for the watch! What caught your attention?
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~Undercaffinated Sep 5, 2009, 4:49:54 PM
Well, I was looking for a good yaoi fic to read, and I stumbled on Pet, and I couldn't stop reading it, and this is turning into a run-on sentence, so I decided to watch you so I would know when the next chapter comes out ^^
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*Soleste81 Sep 5, 2009, 5:00:52 PM
cool! Pet is one of my favs that I've done :) he's too cute :)
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~Undercaffinated Sep 5, 2009, 5:42:25 PM
he is lol! You're a fantastic writer! :) I'd like to write a yaoi fic of my own sometime, but I'm a little shy about that kind of thing lol xD
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